I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
New Zealand the most beautiful place to stay and enjoy come to New Zealand and explore.You can learn a lot of things and if you want to go for a walk in the bushes then there will be tracks and signs telling you about trees.
Hello Shriya, I really like your piece of writing about NZ and how beautiful it is. You've done a great job explaining what being here is like, and I think it is so accurate. Well Done! It sure does have a lot of places to explore, like the big crater at Mt Eden, Mt Manganui etc. That is only 2 of the hundreds of different things. I have gone to walks like Waikowhai Bay, and walked through the jungle-like paths, and there is lots of signs and traps that are so fascinating. Maybe next time you can give examples of different places to explore in NZ.
Happy Blogging Gargee HPS hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz (Work fast, at 12 midnight the SLJ ends!)
Hello Shriya, I am Vitaraag. You have put so much effort into this blog post. I really like your description about how good New Zealand is. Maybe next time you can say some backstory about New Zealand to know what has been going on. Do you want to stay in New Zealand forever? Keep up the phenomenal work!
Well done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Going, going... gone!' and for telling us about life in New Zealand in 2018. I'm so happy to see that you've drawn a picture of Aotearoa— well done!! This is the first I've seen for this activity, so know that you've picked a unique way to respond to this activity. It's always good for me (as someone who has read hundreds of student activities) to see something a bit different, thank you! You've really sold New Zealand to me as a place that is a wonder to explore— I love hiking, do you like any outdoor activities?
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Hi Shriya,
ReplyDeleteI'm Coree and I just red your infomation of what to do if you came to new zealand.That is pretty good though
-Coree
Hello Shriya,
ReplyDeleteI really like your piece of writing about NZ and how beautiful it is. You've done a great job explaining what being here is like, and I think it is so accurate. Well Done! It sure does have a lot of places to explore, like the big crater at Mt Eden, Mt Manganui etc. That is only 2 of the hundreds of different things. I have gone to walks like Waikowhai Bay, and walked through the jungle-like paths, and there is lots of signs and traps that are so fascinating. Maybe next time you can give examples of different places to explore in NZ.
Happy Blogging
Gargee HPS
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
(Work fast, at 12 midnight the SLJ ends!)
Hello Shriya,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag. You have put so much effort into this blog post. I really like your description about how good New Zealand is. Maybe next time you can say some backstory about New Zealand to know what has been going on. Do you want to stay in New Zealand forever? Keep up the phenomenal work!
Vitaraag
Hi everyone
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comments and yes I was born in New Zealand.This is my last work for the holidays so thx for your support
From Shriya
Mōrena Shriya,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Going, going... gone!' and for telling us about life in New Zealand in 2018. I'm so happy to see that you've drawn a picture of Aotearoa— well done!! This is the first I've seen for this activity, so know that you've picked a unique way to respond to this activity. It's always good for me (as someone who has read hundreds of student activities) to see something a bit different, thank you!
You've really sold New Zealand to me as a place that is a wonder to explore— I love hiking, do you like any outdoor activities?
Cheers!
Jordan
Hi Jordan
ReplyDeletethx so much i really appreciate this summer learning.I really like walking in a nice summer evening with my family
Cheers!
Shriya