I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Ben and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey.
Your comic strip is really well done! I can tell you’ve put a lot of care into the format and the way you present it to others and I really appreciate that.
Speaking of fishing, have you ever been fishing yourself?
Kia Ora Shriya, My name is Moala and I from St. Pius X Catholic School I really like the way that you specific about your activity I don't know what the experience of fishing is like because I have never done it
Thank you for your comment. I really appreciate your kind and positive words. I think you should try fishing. It is pretty fun because you get to spend more time with your family. I have been fishing with my family and it was a great experience.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Shriya
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ben and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey.
Your comic strip is really well done! I can tell you’ve put a lot of care into the format and the way you present it to others and I really appreciate that.
Speaking of fishing, have you ever been fishing yourself?
Keep up the good mahi!
Kind regards,
Benjamin
Kia Ora Ben,
DeleteThank you for your comment. I really appreciate your kind and positive words. I have been fishing with my family. It was a great experience.
Happy Holidays
Shriya
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Shriya,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Moala and I from St. Pius X Catholic School
I really like the way that you specific about your activity
I don't know what the experience of fishing is like because I have never done it
Have you ever been fishing?
Kia Ora Moala,
DeleteThank you for your comment. I really appreciate your kind and positive words. I think you should try fishing. It is pretty fun because you get to spend more time with your family. I have been fishing with my family and it was a great experience.
Happy Holidays
Shriya