I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Here is my story map of a book I read. The book that I read is called Huria Matenga. I have also added a real life NZ map showing where Whakapuaka, Nelson is.
Hi Shriya, it's Olivia from Ahipara school. I really like how you put a photo up to show where Whakapuaka, Nelson, NZ is. Maybe next time you can try and explain what your task was, or say what the book was about. Keep up the Fantastic work! Your friend Olivia.
Hi Shrya it's Diaz from Ahipara school. I like how you put a photo up to show where Whakapuaka, Nelson, NZ is. Maybe next time you can try and explain what your task was.
Hi Shrya it's Kohen from paroa school. I like how you showed where Nelson was because some people might not know where it is. Maybe next time you could put a brighter coulor if you wanted to.
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Hi Shriya, it's Olivia from Ahipara school. I really like how you put a photo up to show where Whakapuaka, Nelson, NZ is. Maybe next time you can try and explain what your task was, or say what the book was about. Keep up the Fantastic work! Your friend Olivia.
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Hi Shrya it's Diaz from Ahipara school. I like how you put a photo up to show where Whakapuaka, Nelson, NZ is. Maybe next time you can try and explain what your task was.
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Hi Shrya it's Kohen from paroa school. I like how you showed where Nelson was because some people might not know where it is. Maybe next time you could put a brighter coulor if you wanted to.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Shriya, I love how you have placed all your place's. Carry on with the good work.
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Mahara,
DeleteThank you for your wonderful comment. Hopefully I get to see some of your amazing work.