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Monday 14 December 2020

SLJ: Your Comments Count


Kia Ora Everyone,

Here is my first task for the Summer Learning Journey program 2020. This task was about quality blog comments. I chose this blog post because I thought that I will give some positive feedback to Victoria. The comment that I wrote to Victoria was positive and helpful. It was positive because I gave her back a compliment about her work and it was helpful because I asked her if she could add some information about this picture. What kind of comment do you think I wrote? Was it positive, thoughtful or helpful?

Have a great and safe holiday everyone.


Thanks

Shriya


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5 comments:

  1. Daniel from the SLJ Team14 December 2020 at 14:44

    Hey Shriya

    I’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer too.

    I think this is a fantastic comment Shriya! You've been thoughtful and helpful, while making suggestions for improvement and asking questions to encourage Victoria to share more.

    It’s also very sweet to see you wishing them an amazing holiday, I hope you are safe and enjoy the summer as well,

    Great start for the SLJ for yourself too, keep up the good work.
    See you later in the comments.

    Daniel

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  2. Anonymous14 December 2020 at 16:13

    Kia Ora Shriya,

    I'm Hayley, a Year 7 from Matawai School. I enjoyed reading you lovely feedback on Victoria's blog! Personally, I think that your comment was very helpful (in telling her what she could do next time) thoughtful and lastly very positive! Hopefully, your beautiful comment makes Victoria want to keep writing blog posts and maybe even write a description under each picture!

    Once again, I think your comment is great!
    Happy holidays!

    Ma Te Wa,
    Hayley

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  3. Shriya15 December 2020 at 14:44

    Kia Ora Daniel and Hayley,

    Thank you for your kind and positive comments. I really appreciate your words and I am looking forward to posting more things this holiday.

    Kind Regards
    Shriya

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  4. Unknown15 December 2020 at 18:27

    Kia ora Shriya,
    This is a great comment, it is positive and helpful! I like how you explained your post and asked your readers a question as well. I look forward to seeing more of your posts throughout the summer learning journey.

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    1. Shriya15 December 2020 at 19:06

      Kia Ora Roya,

      Thank you for your comment. I really appreciate your comment and I am looking forward to seeing more of your comments.

      Thanks
      Shriya

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Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

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