I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Your slide show is really nice and done well. I really like the title slide photo and the animated "Thanks for watching". The pictures of the food also make the second slide interesting and show your readers what you are talking about.
It's awesome to see lots of healthy choices here like all kinds of fruit, peanuts and (lots of) water. Water is definitely important to bring along. I hope you shared this with whoever you imagine made the 'Homemade dinner' to show them how much you like their cooking :).
This is a really good start on your SLJ activities, make sure to read the questions carefully so you answer all parts of it.
Keep on posting and I'll see you in the comments. Daniel :)
Don't worry, your posts are really good and there is no pressure to complete all the tasks. I'd much rather you went at your pace and had fun. You can also skip ahead and do any of the tasks you find interesting in any order.
I said "Keep on posting" because I'm exited to see your work, you don't have to maintain any speed or progress more than you'd like.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Shriya,
ReplyDeleteYour slide show is really nice and done well. I really like the title slide photo and the animated "Thanks for watching". The pictures of the food also make the second slide interesting and show your readers what you are talking about.
It's awesome to see lots of healthy choices here like all kinds of fruit, peanuts and (lots of) water. Water is definitely important to bring along. I hope you shared this with whoever you imagine made the 'Homemade dinner' to show them how much you like their cooking :).
This is a really good start on your SLJ activities, make sure to read the questions carefully so you answer all parts of it.
Keep on posting and I'll see you in the comments.
Daniel :)
Hi Daniel
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment
I am just little bit behind so it's taking me a long time
ReplyDeleteHey Shriya,
DeleteDon't worry, your posts are really good and there is no pressure to complete all the tasks. I'd much rather you went at your pace and had fun. You can also skip ahead and do any of the tasks you find interesting in any order.
I said "Keep on posting" because I'm exited to see your work, you don't have to maintain any speed or progress more than you'd like.
Daniel:)