Paying it forward SLJ
Back in 1930's,In their days Boys used to where little hats that look like artist hat and they are small and black or grey and with girls they wore summer hats with Flowers on them and there clothes were coats' that are black or grey and ties and pants with girls they wore the same or dresses'.In the days would give them a gift like a chocolate bar or new cloths.
True True thx shriya it helps me alot you should make a slide so it will be better but it still good
ReplyDeleteTena koe Shriya,
ReplyDeleteThere were some interesting descriptions in your writing. I agree the hats the men are wearing do look like artist hats. What does paying it forward mean to you? Next time you might like to change the word 'there' to 'their'. When something belongs to someone you use 'their'.
Hi I think your summer learning Journey is very nice and have interesting words in you r sentence.
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