I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Shriya Its Harrison from paroa school I am one of your tuhi mai tuhi atu buddies for this year. This looks amazing I really like how you made the background of the slides poppies.Maybe next you could write were all the spots they fought at were. From Harrison
Hello Shriya its Eden from Whenua. How are you? I think you have done a great job on this piece of work! Your blog is super cool keep up the good work!
Hey Shriya its Bella from Paroa School. I really like how you explained everything and put in lots of info. That is really good and cool and it taught me a bit more about NZ and anzac day. Are you going to stand in your driveway instead of celabrating at the dawn parade? One thing that could make you BTB (Better Than Before) is to maybe add a bigger caption underneath your slide. Other than that it is really good. Stay safe and well. Bella
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Hi Shriya Its Harrison from paroa school I am one of your tuhi mai tuhi atu buddies for this year. This looks amazing I really like how you made the background of the slides poppies.Maybe next you could write were all the spots they fought at were. From Harrison
ReplyDeleteHello Shriya its Eden from Whenua. How are you? I think you have done a great job on this piece of work! Your blog is super cool keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHey Shriya its Bella from Paroa School. I really like how you explained everything and put in lots of info. That is really good and cool and it taught me a bit more about NZ and anzac day. Are you going to stand in your driveway instead of celabrating at the dawn parade? One thing that could make you BTB (Better Than Before) is to maybe add a bigger caption underneath your slide. Other than that it is really good.
ReplyDeleteStay safe and well.
Bella
that is rely good i like how expland a lot
ReplyDeleteKia Ora this is Shriya
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your comments I really appreciate your comments