I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Shriya, That looks like a very special room, packed with tonnes of presents! You get to see the view of the whole city outside, along with the beautiful blue sky and dimensional clouds. In my dream hotel, everything would be smooth concrete, and there will be may provided things, like a free snack bar and special soaps and samples. I like how you have a TV right in front of the bed to show that you can relax, and how your room has an enourmous window. Next time you can put a small description of the room to go along with the picture.
Hello Shriya, I am Vitaraag. Your dream hotel looks really nice. I probably would of booked it to lie in it. Do you want to actually have a hotel like that? Maybe next time you could say where you would put it. For example like it would be next to a because or something like that. Keep up the good work!
Hello Shriya, My name is Jack and I really liked your hotel room. Where did you put it? I made mine out of grass and put it in the rice fields on the hill in Thailand! You can check it out on my blog (https://psjacka.blogspot.com/) Keep up the good work - Jack
Well done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Salt and Pepper' and for designing your very own hotel! I really enjoy the picture that you've designed here— I can see that your guests have a passion for shopping. Can you tell me what materials you would use to build this hotel, and where you'd like to build it?
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Hello Shriya,
ReplyDeleteThat looks like a very special room, packed with tonnes of presents! You get to see the view of the whole city outside, along with the beautiful blue sky and dimensional clouds. In my dream hotel, everything would be smooth concrete, and there will be may provided things, like a free snack bar and special soaps and samples. I like how you have a TV right in front of the bed to show that you can relax, and how your room has an enourmous window. Next time you can put a small description of the room to go along with the picture.
Happy Blogging
Gargee HPS
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
Hello Shriya,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag. Your dream hotel looks really nice. I probably would of booked it to lie in it. Do you want to actually have a hotel like that? Maybe next time you could say where you would put it. For example like it would be next to a because or something like that. Keep up the good work!
Vitaraag
Hello Shriya, My name is Jack and I really liked your hotel room. Where did you put it? I made mine out of grass and put it in the rice fields on the hill in Thailand! You can check it out on my blog (https://psjacka.blogspot.com/)
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work - Jack
Hi everyone
ReplyDeleteThx for the comments and for the support.Thank you
From Shriya
Kia Ora Shriya,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Salt and Pepper' and for designing your very own hotel! I really enjoy the picture that you've designed here— I can see that your guests have a passion for shopping. Can you tell me what materials you would use to build this hotel, and where you'd like to build it?
Cheers,
Jordan