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Saturday 5 January 2019

My beast

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My beast is a really hairy beast.It has long nails and slimy gum.

My beast is kind but has sharp and has one really sharp and shiny teeth.

My beast can breath fire and can do a huge and a really big fire it can burn houses but my beast won't do that anymore.

My beast has sharp claws and has a long tali

My beast name is Mr Hairy

2 comments:

  1. Hi Shriya
    I am Molly from Grey main school in Greymouth.
    I like the image you have chosen to describe. You can see that it is hairy, has long nails, Sharp teeth and so on. Have you named this beast? Next time maybe you could get some sort of image to show that it really breaths fire.
    Keep up the great work
    Molly

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  2. Good morning Shriya,

    Well done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity, 'Fantastic Beasts', and for providing an excellent description of your beast. I see that you've used the Beast from the wonderful movie Beauty and the Beast.

    Don't forget what I said about image attribution— we need to give credit to this image and we can do this by giving it a name (for example: the Beast), as well as a link to location of where we got this image and the author, or website of this image (for example: The Little Red Reading Books). If we can get image attribution sorted early, then I know that you'll do an incredible job with the rest of the programme!

    Your beast sounds really incredible— I like how they can breathe fire but is also kind enough not to burn down houses anymore. What is your beasts name?

    I look forward to your response!

    Cheers,

    Jordan

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