I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Shriya, I love your blog post, especially the recipes they look delicious, I'm going to have to try that sometime. There isn't really anything you could improve on right now so, keep up the good work! Your friend, Olivia - Ahipara School.
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Kia ora Shriya, I love your blog post, especially the recipes they look delicious, I'm going to have to try that sometime. There isn't really anything you could improve on right now so, keep up the good work! Your friend, Olivia - Ahipara School.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you shared on your blog food recipes. I will have to try one of those one day. Really good work, from Kyvana-Ahipara school.