I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Shriya my name is Dakota from Ahipara School I really like it but maybe next time you could make the writing a bit easier to read. Other then that keep up the great work!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hi Shirya this is Calais from paroa grey i like how you are going to help people be safe online. its a nice poster its great what you made.
ReplyDeleteHi Calais
DeleteThanks for your comment. We all need to be safe online from strangers and this poster will help
Hi Shriya my name is Dakota from Ahipara School I really like it but maybe next time you could make the writing a bit easier to read. Other then that keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Dakota
DeleteThanks for your comment and sorry about the writing being small
Thanks
Shriya