I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hi my name is rosce this paragraph is good but maybe add more detail
ReplyDeletenice work from roscoe
Hi Roscoe
DeleteThanks for your comment
Hi Shriya it is me skylah
ReplyDeleteI would like to say I really like your about and it was so nice new more things about.
Hi Skylah,
DeleteThanks for the nice comment