I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is a really cool poem, I love the repetition of the "I" (like 'eye') sound. It's a very hopeful poem and the idea of the moon being a friend and 'nudging us to the next sunrise' is beautiful. Great stuff Shriya, can't wait to see what else you come up with when you start posting again.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Shriya,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool poem, I love the repetition of the "I" (like 'eye') sound. It's a very hopeful poem and the idea of the moon being a friend and 'nudging us to the next sunrise' is beautiful. Great stuff Shriya, can't wait to see what else you come up with when you start posting again.
See you in the comments.
Daniel :)