I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Awesome pick to write about a charity. That's so cool that they're coming up to 100 years of helping out people in need. Your slide show looks super cool as always, it was smart to use a white highlight on the black text so you could still include the shadowed picture. And awesome to focus on asking other people to donate.
Keep up the great work Shriya, I hope you have a look a head to the other SLJ activities and find so ones that you really like.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Shriya,
ReplyDeleteAwesome pick to write about a charity. That's so cool that they're coming up to 100 years of helping out people in need. Your slide show looks super cool as always, it was smart to use a white highlight on the black text so you could still include the shadowed picture. And awesome to focus on asking other people to donate.
Keep up the great work Shriya, I hope you have a look a head to the other SLJ activities and find so ones that you really like.
See you in the comments.
Daniel :)
Hi Daniel
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment
I really enjoy doing these kind of activities
Thx
Shriya