I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 27 October 2017
a story about going to fiji
1.we booked the ticket and sat down on the seat and it was looking like a rocket ship where it leans back and blast of like a 3,2,1 then blast of. It was so so cool even my ears were blocked and i played video games and watched movies and sat on a cosy chair and eat and go to the toilet and have breakfast it was so fun and enjoyable. 2. I went to my family’s house the next day i drank passion fruit drink and went to suva park had a picnic and went to the beautiful water park and were there were drinks food and a hotel,and a relaxing place. 3.the next month me and my mum and dad came and it wasssss fantastic and it took 30 mins to get of the plane because some people were still sleeping and that's my story about going to fiji.By shriya
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