Shriya
Edmund Hillary school
1 Hunua Road
Papakura , Auckland
Thursday 7 September 2017
Dear Stardome
Thank you for the bus ride to Stardom.
I really enjoyed the movie that we watched together.
We had so much fun and my best part was when we lay down and we watched the beautiful sky and stars.
My favorite thing is when we sat down and looking at up the beautiful sky. I learnt about something before when we all were coming to the trip I learnt about the solar system that the sun has a whole lot of family it’s called the solar system.
Our solar system is the planets that goes around the sun. the planets are called family that goes around the sun.
The earth spins around the sun slowly and goes around the sun once.
Your sincerely
Shriya.
I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Shriya, some lovely ideas in this letter. It might be a good idea to check the writing information slide to check how to set a letter out.
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